Cosmetics

Doc/Sd1/Appendix/Exam/2024/Winter/exam.xml

@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@
               <para>Apart from requiring the ugly <code language="java">return
               null</code> statement this approach is also ineffective due to
               possibly looping over all 12 zodiacs before finding the desired
-              match. This being cumbersome a better approach creates a
-              two-dimensional array <code>private static final Zodiac[][]
-              zodiacByMonthByDay</code> of zodiacs beforehand using
-              <code>month.ordinal()</code> as first and <code>day</code> as
-              second dimension index values:</para>
+              match. This being cumbersome we create a two-dimensional array
+              <code>private static final Zodiac[][] zodiacByMonthByDay</code>
+              of zodiacs beforehand using <code>month.ordinal()</code> as
+              first and <code>day</code> as second dimension index
+              values:</para>
 
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@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ static {
 
               <para>static blocks get processed even before
               <code>main(...)</code> is being started. This guarantees our
-              array being initialized before any access happens. Our
+              array being initialized before any access happens. Our improved
               <methodname>getZodiac(...)</methodname> implementation no longer
               requires any loop or other quirks:</para>