From 8fa385764a774ac93eb09f644cbff0e3e7513d9f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Goik <goik@hdm-stuttgart.de>
Date: Wed, 1 Jun 2016 09:20:21 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] cosmetics

---
 Doc/Sdi/ldap.xml | 14 ++++++++------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Doc/Sdi/ldap.xml b/Doc/Sdi/ldap.xml
index 0d15cb0e2..d0194a2df 100644
--- a/Doc/Sdi/ldap.xml
+++ b/Doc/Sdi/ldap.xml
@@ -477,9 +477,9 @@ userPassword:: e3NtZDV9YVhKL2JlVkF2TDRENk9pMFRLcDhjM3ovYTZQZzBXeHA=</programlist
       according to the documentation:</para>
 
       <note xlink:href="http://www.openldap.org/doc/admin24/slapdconf2.html">
-        <para>The older style slapd.conf(5) file is still supported, but its
-        use is deprecated and support for it will be withdrawn in a future
-        OpenLDAP release.</para>
+        <para>The older style <filename>slapd.conf</filename>(5) file is still
+        supported, but its use is deprecated and support for it will be
+        withdrawn in a future OpenLDAP release.</para>
       </note>
 
       <para>The <xref linkend="glo_DIT"/> style configuration may be altered
@@ -488,7 +488,9 @@ userPassword:: e3NtZDV9YVhKL2JlVkF2TDRENk9pMFRLcDhjM3ovYTZQZzBXeHA=</programlist
       using <filename>.ldif</filename> files. An alternate way requires
       altering the server's configuration
       <filename>/etc/ldap/slapd.d/cn\=config/olcDatabase\=\{0\}config.ldif</filename>.
-      We start by gathering required information:</para>
+      We start by gathering required information. Note: The
+      <command>ldapsearch</command> command is part of the
+      <package>openldap-utils</package> package:</para>
 
       <programlisting language="none">ldapsearch -Y EXTERNAL -H ldapi:/// -b cn=config
 
@@ -522,8 +524,8 @@ olcRootPW: {SSHA}7M0gUyHOH7cfK1z9amqgK0uQcn84AuYw</emphasis>
       xlink:href="https://directory.apache.org/studio">Apache Directory
       Studio</productname> requires adding this credential attribute. This
       first-time (bootstrapping) configuration must be done locally by means
-      of an <xref linkend="glo_LDIF"/> file using a different user's hash
-      value:</para>
+      of an <xref linkend="glo_LDIF"/> file adding a (possibly different)
+      hashed password:</para>
 
       <programlisting language="none">root@sdi8a:~# cat ~/add_olcRootPW.ldif
 dn: olcDatabase={0}config,cn=config
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