From 33a8b4744880288fd27b1389ab221c92f57154cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Goik <goik@hdm-stuttgart.de>
Date: Tue, 15 Sep 2015 20:23:24 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] style corrections
---
Doc/Sd1/languageFundamentals.xml | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Doc/Sd1/languageFundamentals.xml b/Doc/Sd1/languageFundamentals.xml
index dcabf9c37..f932dcde3 100644
--- a/Doc/Sd1/languageFundamentals.xml
+++ b/Doc/Sd1/languageFundamentals.xml
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@
<para>As you may know the <xref linkend="glo_RGB"/> color model uses
triplets of numbers to define color value components representing
- intensities of three base colors <foreignphrase><emphasis
+ intensities of its three base colors <foreignphrase><emphasis
role="bold">R</emphasis>ed</foreignphrase>, <foreignphrase><emphasis
role="bold">G</emphasis>reen</foreignphrase> and
<foreignphrase><emphasis role="bold">B</emphasis>lue</foreignphrase>.
@@ -388,14 +388,14 @@
intensity.</para>
<para>The color <quote>red</quote> for example is being represented by
- (255, 0, 0). So the red component has maximum intensity, blue and green
- are zero.</para>
+ (255, 0, 0). So the red component has maximum intensity while blue and
+ green are zero.</para>
- <para>It is common to use <link
+ <para>It is however common to use <link
xlink:href="http://www.december.com/html/spec/color16codes.html">hexadecimal
- in favour of decimal values</link>. Thus the font color
- <quote>red</quote> in the subsequent HTML example's heading is being
- represented by <emphasis role="bold">(FF,0,0)</emphasis>:</para>
+ in favour of decimal values</link>. Thus the same color
+ <quote>red</quote> in the subsequent HTML example's heading font is now
+ being represented by <emphasis role="bold">(FF,0,0)</emphasis>:</para>
<programlisting language="html"><!DOCTYPE html>
<html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
@@ -412,8 +412,8 @@
<qandadiv>
<qandaentry>
<question>
- <para>Write a program printing the decimal value of the
- hexadecimal representation <inlineequation>
+ <para>Write a program printing the hexadecimal representation
+ <inlineequation>
<m:math display="inline">
<m:msub>
<m:mi>C0</m:mi>
@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@
<m:mi>16</m:mi>
</m:msub>
</m:math>
- </inlineequation>.</para>
+ </inlineequation> as a decimal value.</para>
<para>Complete the following code by assigning the hexadecimal
value <inlineequation>
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@
<m:mi>16</m:mi>
</m:msub>
</m:math>
- </inlineequation> (The <quote>silver</quote> color all three
+ </inlineequation> (The <quote>silver</quote> color's all three
component's intensity in <uri
xlink:href="http://www.december.com/html/spec/color16codes.html">http://www.december.com/html/spec/color16codes.html</uri>)
to get the output in decimal representation.</para>
@@ -444,10 +444,10 @@
}</programlisting>
<tip>
- <para>You may want to consider <quote
+ <para>You may want to consider the <quote
xlink:href="http://proquest.safaribooksonline.com/9780992133047/toc6_html_2">Literals</quote>
- to find out how to represent integer values in hexadecimal
- notation.</para>
+ section learning about hexadecimal integer value
+ representation.</para>
</tip>
</question>
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