From 1b08c5386448bd0daf49c9bfc6d92fb3e5c63259 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Goik <goik@hdm-stuttgart.de>
Date: Thu, 1 Dec 2016 10:07:52 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Cosmetics
---
Doc/Sd1/appendix.xml | 30 ++++++++++++++++--------------
1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Doc/Sd1/appendix.xml b/Doc/Sd1/appendix.xml
index e7a4bfc9c..3d442a3d6 100644
--- a/Doc/Sd1/appendix.xml
+++ b/Doc/Sd1/appendix.xml
@@ -138,12 +138,12 @@
</section>
<section version="5.0" xml:id="sd1SectExamAmendingProjects">
- <title>Examination bonus point project</title>
+ <title>Examination bonus point projects</title>
- <para>Each participant may start a project to gain a bonus with respect to
- the final examination. This bonus is given as a percentage and will be
- added to your final examinations mark. Possible values depending on a
- project's achievements are:</para>
+ <para>Each lecture participant may start a project to gain bonus points
+ with respect to the final examination. This bonus is given as a percentage
+ and will be added to your final examinations mark. Possible values
+ depending on a project's achievements are:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -165,13 +165,15 @@
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>You are expected to work as a team of three partners.</para>
+ <para>You are expected to work as a <emphasis role="bold">team of
+ three partners</emphasis>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Using the <link
xlink:href="https://gitlab.mi.hdm-stuttgart.de/">MI Gitlab SCM</link>
- is a plus with respect to the project's evaluation.</para>
+ is a plus with respect to the project's evaluation. See table
+ below.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -277,7 +279,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Your resulting project should be easily installable /
+ <para>Your resulting project should be easily installable and
runnable.</para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -347,7 +349,7 @@
propositions.</para>
<section xml:id="sd1SectProjectAddressDatabase">
- <title>An address database (Winter 2016)</title>
+ <title>An address database, Winter 2016</title>
<para>Consider executing <command>java</command> <option>-jar <link
xlink:href="/Sd1/Ref/Src/address.zip">address.zip</link></option>:</para>
@@ -472,16 +474,16 @@ Eve,Gardener, ,32-44-2234</programlisting>
<listitem>
<para><link
- xlink:href="http://tutorials.jenkov.com/java-io">jenkov.com Java IO
- Tutorial</link></para>
+ xlink:href="http://tutorials.jenkov.com/java-io/index.html">jenkov.com
+ Java IO Tutorial</link></para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</section>
<section xml:id="sd1SectProjectGrep">
<title>Poor man's <xref linkend="glo_UNIX"/> <command
- xlink:href="http://linux.die.net/man/1/grep">grep</command>. (Summer
- 2016)</title>
+ xlink:href="http://linux.die.net/man/1/grep">grep</command>, Summer
+ 2016</title>
<para>The <xref linkend="glo_UNIX"/> operating system provides a command
<command xlink:href="http://linux.die.net/man/1/grep">grep</command>
@@ -795,7 +797,7 @@ public class AppTest {
<section xml:id="sd1ProjectSieveErathostenes">
<title>Project <link
xlink:href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sieve_of_Eratosthenes#Euler.27s_Sieve">Euler's
- sieve</link> (Winter 2015)</title>
+ sieve</link>, Winter 2015</title>
<para>The project's goal is about:</para>
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